That's really cool. It's descriptive and fits with the rhythm.

-Scrat

What I find most chilling about this piece is that I was on a plane earlier today heading back to school having somewhat similar thoughts about how it's a mismatch of brown and green and concrete and water.

So...kudos for being in my head like that, haha! I do not feel qualified to con-crit your poetry, so I'll leave it at that, sug, but just know you did a fantastic job and I hope you got an A on this assignment.

Tex

yeah, I'm totally on mu phone. :p

Anywho, I like the description and it flowed rather nicely. muy cute.

Natz