I liked this. "The clouds spread their jaws with greed, revealing a mouthful of stars," That's wonderful. It flows, it's very visual... Well done. Excellent job.

This is a pretty pessimistic thought, that most dreams never come to be. But true sadly.

Well written with good flow, very good!

This is one of the most intriguing and meaningful poems i have ever read. I like it very much :)

pretty good

Wow! Love the star/sky imagery! I'm in a starry phase at the moment and so happily appreciate this poem! Lovely!

Also, i love your pen name! It seems to connotae fading/failing memory...