I believe this was a suitable ending to Hailstorm. I loved this story and all of the great adventure and action with it. I'm definitely going to read your other story as well.

This is a nice final chapter . I'm glad Hail and Zhanna could work outeverything between them andcan settle intoworking towards being a happy family.

I love the action in this chapter. Great fight with Nemisis and Ruin. I'm looking forward to your conclusion.

I like the depth of Hail's guilt and his power to overcome it. I also love the background on Nemisis and Ruin. Great chapter, it and emotional especially on Hail's end.

Nice reunion with the prisoners as well as that heart felt moment with Noah and Connor. I wonder what's ahead for Ruin and Nemisis as well. Great chapter.

As our heroes press on my heart feels more and more. I like how thier fates are being pulled together and how everything is falling into place. With each chapter I read, the more involed and interested I bevme. I love all of the characters and thier stories. Great job.

Your Halloween special was funny especially when Connor was pumched in the face. I couldn't help but chuckle. It was a nice addition to the overall story.

It seems Micah will be reunited with Vetra. I think major characterization might be in order in future chapters. This is getting good.

I take it some will live and some will die. It's all a matter of who. Poor Taras indeed. He's my favorite character. I wonder what the High Vircle has in store for our novelist.

I believe Meredith has good intentions, she just strikes me as an antihero. However, I wonder about Ruin's opinion on her, knowledge speaks as well. Also, I will live through this. Poor Micah. I hope he finds happiness.

This is getting interesting, especially with Cronus and Nemisis being interwoven. Something tells me this will truly be a battle of the gods.

This chapter was great and emotional. I'm glad Meredith didn't die. She and Taras are my favorite characters. I will definitely read more later. I am enjoying these chapters.

Another great chapter, with Ruin awake again, things are sure to get interesting and now Zhanna is pregant as well. The plot just keeps thickening with Hail's life.

This was a dramatic chapter. I wonder what will happen now that Zhanna knows Hail's secret.

It's nice to have everyone together now, and the true story behind Ruin exposed. I like how things okayed out and the budding understanding between the priest and Taras. Also his inspiration for writing, and Hail's tumultuous relationship and consuming guilt.

I liked the way this turned out, especially the scene with Taras and Meredirh, as well as the father and the priest's resolve to seek the truth. There is nice development here.