|Reviews for Haikus and Other Short Stanza Poetry|
| Dreamers-Requiem 12/29/12 . chapter 2
I really like these; my parents and various relatives used to say God was moving furniture when there was thunder. I especially like the one 'Something Taken'. It really stuck out to me. Good job.
| Dreamers-Requiem 10/2/12 . chapter 1
I really like these - they're nice and simple, but there feels like there's more behind them, especailly number 5. I'm glad you grouped them together, too, makes for a nicer read. Good stuff.
| BWP INC 8/31/12 . chapter 1
your a good writer
| Snowflakes and Glitter 8/27/12 . chapter 14
I really love the Peanuts piece, I thought that was brilliant :) being a Scorpio myself, I've had a few mischievous moments myself hehe
| Dragon-Rider II 1/29/11 . chapter 11
Secrets- I like this one. (But sometimes the secret gets out...) Yes... the secret lives on...
(I feel very proud of myself for some reason I can't figure out...)
A Game- Poor people who have lost. :( I wonder what the game is, though...
| Dragon-Rider II 1/29/11 . chapter 10
Poor tree. But I really like this- Crushed Blossoms.
Especially this bit-
A vain attempt to
Return the now transparent
Flowers to their home
Yup. Love it.
| Dragon-Rider II 1/29/11 . chapter 9
Meteor Sighting- Wow. I always wanted to see a meteor. (And my sister took it out on me and my little brother when we contributed to the fact she missed seeing one.)
Gritty Sand- (I LOVE sand!) And I love this too! (But it confused me a little at first... :P)
The Sea's Nature- Yup. Thinking they can own the sea... *Shakes head*
Haiku's Limit- Gets on my nerves, too. But I think that's the point- fitting a lot in a little.
| Dragon-Rider II 1/29/11 . chapter 8
An Open Door- I interpret the treasure at being books. XD Love 'em.
Autumn- Wow, I never thought about it like that. But now you mention it... flames indeed.
Ponder this- Hehe, how much indeed. (This could go both ways, in my opinion. I believe it's about interpreting.
| Dragon-Rider II 1/29/11 . chapter 7
WEE! I'm on a roll with this!
Love is here- Aww, that's cute.
Coffee's Substitute- When I read the title, I thought- NOTHING rivals coffee. (Assuming said coffee is white coffee/cappuccino/mochachino.) But after I read it... hehe, I like it.
Slowly Draining Day- WOOT! Hehe, I really like this. 'Inky lines'- I like it for some reason.
Imagination Runs Free- (Thus causing havoc among sensible, strict people.) Yup, so true about the daydreams. :) They come o me all the time.
| Dragon-Rider II 1/29/11 . chapter 6
Windmills- Woot! Producing power! (My mind works in mysterious ways...) But I guess for me it has a second meaning- you don't have to be noticed to be strong.
A Journey- Yup. Hate those times. But then again, that step does a lttle bit more. :)
A Mind- Wee! I like this one! But it sort of makes you feel inferior, too. XD
Time- Yeah. So true.
| Dragon-Rider II 1/29/11 . chapter 5
Hehe, I love haikus.
Hopeless- Yup, that's damn frustrating, that is. Hate those times...
Unseen Shift- Wowies. Amazing. (Storm! :D)
Connected lives- Aww, that's so sweet. :3
Busy- Yup, so true sometimes. You just want the world to stop and stuff your face in a pillow/any other soft object.
| Dragon-Rider II 1/27/11 . chapter 4
Haha, I decided I'm reviewing every chapter here.
Beneath The Water Lies A Fish- Yea, the beautiful fish. Gotta love them.
A Loss- Diabolo Guapo? (Handsome Devil?) Poor fishy. (Diabolo Guapo, R.I.P.)
Torn- Wow, I'm guessing that was a pretty big rip, then.
Mistake- I can't really guess what's going on here, but I've never been a romance-y sort of person anyway. Oh well. Letting it go.
Poetry's Greatest Mystery- Haha, that might be the best thing about poems. They don't have to rhyme! Gotta love them.
Waiting- Don't you hate it when thta happens? The thing's just lying there like, 'Finish me!' And you can't really do a thing.
The Wind's A Force- I like this one. But in the last line, I don't really get it. Oh well. I guess I'll think later. I know what you're saying, but in my opinion the words don't really fit. Maybe it's just me...
| Dragon-Rider II 1/27/11 . chapter 3
Hey, here again.
A tribute- GASP! Haha, kidding. I find it pretty funny, though.
A Dream- Yeah. Dreams. They always manage to escape, and then you'll only be able to remember a few stuff that happened, and you'll be like, 'What happened?' (I hate that.) But other than that, I love it. Dreams are confusing.
In A Nutshell- Haha, I really like this one. (Twice as much because you used the word 'fuzzy' :P)
| Dragon-Rider II 1/27/11 . chapter 2
City- Haha, I love this one. This is how I feel about cities. (Gah. Too much.)
Invisible- A little off with the syllable count, but otherwise, I love it. (They remind me of hosts for some reason. Might be the Sun, though.)
Something Taken- A heart, is it? Yeah, I guess it's true. Love this.
Lightning- Wee lightning! Haha, I love these. You're awesome at this, you know.
Unspoken Anger- I like this one. 'Rain is freed'- I never really thought about it that way.
A simple reality- Haha, god's bowling. Oh yeah. In our family, it'll be something like, 'Get over it'
Mathematics- Haha, so true. It makes common human's brain hurt. Especially the WAY more complex ones.
The Number That Explains All- I don't really get this. Why 42? (Cue brain being fried.) I'll let it go for now...
But I love all of these, anyway.
| Dragon-Rider II 1/27/11 . chapter 1
Hey, I really like these poems.
Raindrops- Yeah, I was going to comment on this not being a ahiku, but you already mentioned it. :P I have no idea what they are either...
Ocean- Favourite one so far. I like the ocean too much.
Breath Taken- I really like this one too, but I counted four syllables in the first line. Other than that, I love it.
Direction Lost- I love the title. So true with the reflections. Everything becomes confuzzling. But I counted eight syllables in the second line, and six in the last. The pattern't 5-7-5, isn't it?
A Meeting- A bit off with the syllable count, but otherwise great.
A Chance- In the first line there are six syllables, but I really like this one. (Comes second to 'Ocean'.) 'Reaching for a chance to live'. I love that bit.