very good image for your topic, close to perfect even

The imagery you created with the short hakiu was wonderful. Nice work!

I really liked this one. Especially with the last line... I like the simple image this poem gives.

I have to wonder, though. Is it the coat that is long gone, or the reader? I guess it could be both, the way it's worded. :)

Great job. :D

ja, da sieht man gut Ursache und Wirkung, endrucksvoll, dass der Einfluß des Mantels länger anhält als seine Existenz

LG

Franziska