|Reviews for BE NICE|
| melodyrose9 12/3/12 . chapter 1
Oh my gosh Brilliance! Brilliance! I love twinkies and this poem!
| irish-ileana 4/17/10 . chapter 1
Haha, that was really cute. BE NICE SO YOU DON'T GET LICE.
I may make that my MSN name.
The only thing I have to say for this is that although it's meant to be short and sweet, you could try adding a bit of structure. It comes off a bit like a few random thought fragments put together. Still, I like the thought(s) behind this and I think it has potential.
| Bradly 4/7/10 . chapter 1
I like it. It's simple direct and too the point. Plus you added a little comedy to it with the lice comment. Good poem. :)
| nickyO 4/1/10 . chapter 1
lol. :) cute.
| fkdjlfikd 3/31/10 . chapter 1
Lol, this is so funny and cute. This is so true. Everything we do in life affects other people and we never seem to realize this. Plus karma is always a bitch, which is why I love the "be nice so you don't get lice" part, brilliant!
| sealednectar 3/31/10 . chapter 1
haha, this is funny and truthful. good work.