Oh my gosh Brilliance! Brilliance! I love twinkies and this poem!

Haha, that was really cute. BE NICE SO YOU DON'T GET LICE.

I may make that my MSN name.

The only thing I have to say for this is that although it's meant to be short and sweet, you could try adding a bit of structure. It comes off a bit like a few random thought fragments put together. Still, I like the thought(s) behind this and I think it has potential.

I like it. It's simple direct and too the point. Plus you added a little comedy to it with the lice comment. Good poem. :)

lol. :) cute.

Lol, this is so funny and cute. This is so true. Everything we do in life affects other people and we never seem to realize this. Plus karma is always a bitch, which is why I love the "be nice so you don't get lice" part, brilliant!

haha, this is funny and truthful. good work.