That was seriously intense. I like how most of it was dialogue and the only way we could figure out the "accident" and the past was through what they said and not some big background story in the narration. Very eerie, very good.

Sorry I haven't reviewed in a long time. Funny, but I've no memory of how or when I first found your writing.

This story is well-written, with a good style. I was a bit surprised it was under Horror. I would have placed it under Tragedy. But then, I have weird reactions, so I might be seeing it as something other than you meant it. I found it to be story of grief and madness, to be honest.

Okay. I'm done babbling. I'll review again at some point soon.

I really like this story. It's very intresting. But honestly, I don't think you should leave it as a one-shot. There's still something that wasn't answered. How's the snake man going to get his wife and two babies back? I think there should be another chapter to this story. Anyway, great job! I'll read more of your works if you have any, and I really hope this story will have more chapters for I really think this shouldn't be left as a one-shot.

This was intriguing and I am dying to read more!

Lovely as always. I feel the atmosphere very thoroughly developed, I like it a lot