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   lili999 5/28/10 . chapter 1hi ! Cheap retail watch, sunglasses, belt, hats/caps, High quality T-shirts, ED hardy t-shirts,ED Hardy hoodies,ED hardy ,Jeans,GUCCI shoes,LV Handbag,Chanel Handbag…high quality,low to |
| eaststar 4/5/10 . chapter 2 In "A sweet calming scent invaded their nostrils" , the word "invaded" is being used in the wrong context. Normally to invade is to barge in, uninvited; to take over. Nice chapter though the opening was a bit slow. Put a bit of action in your beginnings! |
| Makia-chan 4/3/10 . chapter 2 It truly is an . God. moment. i can't wait for the next chapter thank you! ;3 |
| Makia-chan 4/1/10 . chapter 1 Wow. thanks for the first chapter i can't absolutely wait for the next one. |
| eaststar 4/1/10 . chapter 1 Lol I'm really obsessed with your writing! Can I be your number 1 fan? Really nice start to a story though when writing a beginning, you might want to lay off the description and just focus on taking hold on the readers interest. Though it isn't as bad as the overly descriptive beginnings of some other young, aspiring writers on this site 0 Keep on writing! |
