|Reviews for A Poetic Lapse|
| The Wandering Musician 3/28/11 . chapter 2
Great poem! I love the final lines because even though they seem like a conclusion, they raise a lot of questions. I don't understand a lot of your little flourishes (by which I mean the italics, underlining, dashes). I wasn't sure that they really helped the meaning or tone of the poem. You should think about why you add them and whether or not they need to be edited. Other than that, great job!
| Saigishin 13 Hiyamoto 3/27/11 . chapter 1
so much like how my mind works when writing poetry... LMAO...
it's like ok I'm stuck, I had a good line, CRAP WHAT IS IT? oh well, NEXT
err I hate writers block or writers dementia LOL whatever u wanna call it...
good poem I liked it
| Ahthethinghedoes 2/8/11 . chapter 1
That poem... describes me perfecly lol
| Jenny-A 1/26/11 . chapter 1
i love this, you have but that feeling perfectly down on to paper ( well screen). good work
| pretty twisted 5/23/10 . chapter 1
For some reason, I found this cute.
| forget-me-nots 4/1/10 . chapter 1
This is fantastic. [I hate writing reviews; I feel like the words I write are fake. But, they're not.]