|Reviews for Breathe, Just Breathe|
| Cynthia Brent 5/2/10 . chapter 2
Great chapter! I especially like the poem at the end. I hope she gives him the chance to breathe, though. She seems to expect an awful lot!
| jayyy 5/1/10 . chapter 2
A little depressing.
I honestly don't like the girl for
the fact she talks more of her dreams
and the man in her dreams than what she thinks about him.
| Cynthia Brent 4/26/10 . chapter 1
I really like this so much. There's so much more to the story than just the incredibly well-written sexual attraction between these two people. I love the way she has so much to share but she's afraid to let him see everything . . . yet at the same time she longs to be totally honest.
Wonderful story - please keep writing!