Great chapter! I especially like the poem at the end. I hope she gives him the chance to breathe, though. She seems to expect an awful lot!

A little depressing.

I honestly don't like the girl for

the fact she talks more of her dreams

and the man in her dreams than what she thinks about him.

I really like this so much. There's so much more to the story than just the incredibly well-written sexual attraction between these two people. I love the way she has so much to share but she's afraid to let him see everything . . . yet at the same time she longs to be totally honest.

Wonderful story - please keep writing!