|Reviews for Words on a Page|
| HiddenFromYou 4/1/10 . chapter 1
I can't think of much else to say, other than wow. This, like so many of your poems, speaks to me on a personal level, and represents so well how I feel at times.
Trying to look for faults, (sorry XD) the "recollect, collect" line seemed rather clumsy. I think it was because you repeated the syllables in "collect" twice. I tripped over it slightly.
Also, I was somewhat put off my your lack of capitals. I don't mean for every line, they're fine as they are. I mean for things like 'i' which should have been 'I' as that's how it's meant to be wherever it is in a sentence.
Apart from those minor quibbles, top notch poem. :)