Reviews for Greek Gods and Goddesses Poetry Project
Guest 12/14/12 . chapter 1
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sister 12/1/12 . chapter 1
As I return home I am greeted by marble sculptured gods and goddesses.
Carved white - smoothly sculpted marble

Legends held within their breasts

The sculptors skill will attest

Legends held behind softly molded eyes

If they could speak

There would be no lies

Togas draping well formed shoulders

Grandly held within their borders

Acanthus leaves crown curled locks

A design of their long past epox

A crown adorns Diana - Roman goddess of the hunt

Her bow and arrow held in ready placement

As she rests nobly on her pedestal

Her keen eyes ever wakeful

Pauline Bonaparte - sister of Napoleon

No clothing is her desired cast off burden

Lounges languidly - seductively - on her elaborate chaise

Inviting a traveller's embrace

Holding an invitational apple

Inviting one to sample

Evoking the Venus Victrix

With her sly and wylie tricks

Antonio Canovas creation - reflected grandly in golden framed mirror

Inviting to come nearer

Under crystal chandelier

In a far corner on tall marble pedestal

One's eyes befall

On demure Victorian - youthful - beauty

Lowers her eyes before our gaze

As is her duty

Ringlets held in bands of imagined gold

For a fortune she was sold

These are my companions

Bought at auctions

In the softly glowing light

A collector's delight

Which brighten and heighten

My indoor - inner life

Disregarding all strife

Which greet me

With solemn silence

As I return home from the fray

Each and every day

Fortune cookie says

"Be kind to pigeons -

A statue will be made of you".
Tori 11/20/12 . chapter 12
no i dont understand how can it be that hard?
cameron 11/20/12 . chapter 1
stupied!
Joe Momma 11/13/12 . chapter 8
I use an atlas in socail science.
Guest 11/13/12 . chapter 5
hello this isis
Guest 11/13/12 . chapter 1
jffh
Natural and fake beauty 3/14/11 . chapter 1
oh i like this very much. ive always been interested in greek gods and goddesses
Monica Rodarte 1/25/11 . chapter 6
LOVE it!
white wolf97 7/29/10 . chapter 9
there you go, Rhea! girl power!
white wolf97 7/29/10 . chapter 5
thats sad.
white wolf97 7/29/10 . chapter 1
woah. i researched this kind of stuff before, very accurate. me likeses.

do you mind reading my story "The White Wolf"? i also appreciate reviews. *wink wink*
Stormi Reagan 7/29/10 . chapter 2
Though short, you captivated the idea of Gaia and how important she was to the Earth, her children, Titans, Cuclopes and Gods. Yes, 'Gods' got me and hooked me like a hanger... Yeah, that didn't sound too smart haha.

My favorite line was the embrace of the Sky and the Earth near the Horizon. If this is weird, so be it, but I literally imagined the blue sky and the earth's ground hugging beneath a setting sun.

I would leave a longer review, but I will not make stuff up.

Thank you for writing your poetry.
Stormi Reagan 7/29/10 . chapter 1
You used the words well, like this part-

Chaos was running free,

Laughing, Rejoicing in the

Disorder, but he grew sad when he realized that

-was good. I got the idea of Chaos in my head, and his emotions flew fluidly. Also, near the end, where you say

Chaos still waits, listens, and watches

For moments when material ideas and thoughts;

Logic and Reasoning

Fails

To exist.

-hit me hard. Very well done, I might say. Like I said about his emotions, the pace also went fluidly as you didn't clutter the words with some that really didn't need to be in there. Some poetry I've read does that. They may focus too much on one thing and lose the purpose on another. I like your references to the beating heart, the mass of silence, and the darkness. I can relate to feelings of that.

) -Tech Heart
thefluffmysters 7/29/10 . chapter 11
So Thatanos is Hypnos' brother? Hmm... I can see that they are rather similar. Geez, they should both go see a psychaiatrist (i know i spelt that wrong. sorry.) for their issues. XD
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