| Reviews for Greek Gods and Goddesses Poetry Project |
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Guest 12/14/12 . chapter 1 ghjdfgbdjhdtsajdfcmklchxfkty akydrldfufjhgxfbdgdjgfckjdjc bnmjsz shtakyla was here bitchjghyuduifgdifgffidgyfgs ifgisdgyuhsg |
sister 12/1/12 . chapter 1 As I return home I am greeted by marble sculptured gods and goddesses. Carved white - smoothly sculpted marble Legends held within their breasts The sculptors skill will attest Legends held behind softly molded eyes If they could speak There would be no lies Togas draping well formed shoulders Grandly held within their borders Acanthus leaves crown curled locks A design of their long past epox A crown adorns Diana - Roman goddess of the hunt Her bow and arrow held in ready placement As she rests nobly on her pedestal Her keen eyes ever wakeful Pauline Bonaparte - sister of Napoleon No clothing is her desired cast off burden Lounges languidly - seductively - on her elaborate chaise Inviting a traveller's embrace Holding an invitational apple Inviting one to sample Evoking the Venus Victrix With her sly and wylie tricks Antonio Canovas creation - reflected grandly in golden framed mirror Inviting to come nearer Under crystal chandelier In a far corner on tall marble pedestal One's eyes befall On demure Victorian - youthful - beauty Lowers her eyes before our gaze As is her duty Ringlets held in bands of imagined gold For a fortune she was sold These are my companions Bought at auctions In the softly glowing light A collector's delight Which brighten and heighten My indoor - inner life Disregarding all strife Which greet me With solemn silence As I return home from the fray Each and every day Fortune cookie says "Be kind to pigeons - A statue will be made of you". |
Tori 11/20/12 . chapter 12 no i dont understand how can it be that hard? |
cameron 11/20/12 . chapter 1 stupied! |
Joe Momma 11/13/12 . chapter 8 I use an atlas in socail science. |
Guest 11/13/12 . chapter 5 hello this isis |
Guest 11/13/12 . chapter 1 jffh |
Natural and fake beauty 3/14/11 . chapter 1oh i like this very much. ive always been interested in greek gods and goddesses |
Monica Rodarte 1/25/11 . chapter 6 LOVE it! |
white wolf97 7/29/10 . chapter 9there you go, Rhea! girl power! |
white wolf97 7/29/10 . chapter 5thats sad. |
white wolf97 7/29/10 . chapter 1woah. i researched this kind of stuff before, very accurate. me likeses. do you mind reading my story "The White Wolf"? i also appreciate reviews. *wink wink* |
Stormi Reagan 7/29/10 . chapter 2Though short, you captivated the idea of Gaia and how important she was to the Earth, her children, Titans, Cuclopes and Gods. Yes, 'Gods' got me and hooked me like a hanger... Yeah, that didn't sound too smart haha. My favorite line was the embrace of the Sky and the Earth near the Horizon. If this is weird, so be it, but I literally imagined the blue sky and the earth's ground hugging beneath a setting sun. I would leave a longer review, but I will not make stuff up. Thank you for writing your poetry. |
Stormi Reagan 7/29/10 . chapter 1You used the words well, like this part- Chaos was running free, Laughing, Rejoicing in the Disorder, but he grew sad when he realized that -was good. I got the idea of Chaos in my head, and his emotions flew fluidly. Also, near the end, where you say Chaos still waits, listens, and watches For moments when material ideas and thoughts; Logic and Reasoning Fails To exist. -hit me hard. Very well done, I might say. Like I said about his emotions, the pace also went fluidly as you didn't clutter the words with some that really didn't need to be in there. Some poetry I've read does that. They may focus too much on one thing and lose the purpose on another. I like your references to the beating heart, the mass of silence, and the darkness. I can relate to feelings of that. ) -Tech Heart |
thefluffmysters 7/29/10 . chapter 11So Thatanos is Hypnos' brother? Hmm... I can see that they are rather similar. Geez, they should both go see a psychaiatrist (i know i spelt that wrong. sorry.) for their issues. XD |