Wow, that is creepy! You've matched up the rhythm and rhyming to the original perfectly though, it's brilliant! X D

A very descriptive piece of writing you have here! Your writing skills are superb! I definitely enjoyed reading this.

pretty good parody. it made me think of the AntiChirst speaking (that's what you call him in christanity, I think)

I liked the three last lines, very horror-ish :P

Bleh, never liked him, probably because I had to write 40 words on Jekyll and Hyde.

"I rise from my grave and fly".. That's a pretty good imitation, reminds me of Northanger Abbey.

Is this a zombie or a vampire or.. just taking the mick?

I prefer your version :D

That is scary and written very skillfully.

A masterful follow up to a great poem (I'd never read Stevenson's Requiem, I like it much!)

The rising from the dead is a great story to tell, this is also one of my favourite rhyme schemes, I'd love to read more in the same form but as it is it is brill, and a good homage to a great man.

Nice job!

Amazing! really nice use of published work as inspiration for both form and content!

Stevenson is awesome, Disillusionment of Ten O'clock anyone?

My favorite Robert Louis Stevenson story is called The Bottle Imp. That was the first of poetry that I had ever read. Your poem was little more creepy than his.

SirScott

Lovely rhyming technique. :) And i like the similarities between the poems and how you added Stevenson's version. I hadnt read it before and i quite liked it too. :)

This is great! It's like if Robert Louis Stevenson and H.P. Lovecraft were chained together on a chain gang and escaped. They could write poems together and have adventures and it would be like THE DEFIANT ONES.

Very pirateish. He wrote Treasure Island right?

Very good, Punslinger. This is very creepy. "Eating flesh before the kill." Great line. Good work.