I like your style; you know, the way you play with words on this. It's a small piece of literature but you had said a lot along your descriptions. Smoking, is it? Amazing way of description. I like you.

Haha, oh can I relate...I'm really starting to like how you write, you've got this sarcastic overtone that I love. Something about the line "Exhaling the subtle gray air", I really like it.

I love your view on smokes. Totally agree with it :)

an awesome first person narrative.