Everything mentioned in Addenda was mentioned in The World in Play.

While the general category 'yunu' is not original with me, all the named yunu in my stories are my creations.

Wow, this really is fantasy!

I'm so impressed that you've constructed a gripping and sensational plot. The characterization is brilliant. I couldn't stop reading, I was so interested to see what would happen to the amazing fantasy plotline and well-constructed characters!

PS Ahem. Yup. As you may have noticed, I have been perfecting sarcasm since the age of three.

PPS Ignore all of the above.

PS Look at the site name. It is called fictionpress. FICTIONPRESS, I SAY. And why do you think that is? BECAUSE IT'S BLOODY FICTION.

PS Look, I'm sorry. I really am. I'm not an unkind person by nature, but I think you really do need to learn what the word fiction means...and the word fantasy...which means magic, and made up, and not general knowledge coupled with grammar lectures.

PS I don't flame very often. Seriously.

PS Post a proper story, and I'll tell you what I think. Until then, ciao and work on the OCD.

PS I have OCD. It's not fun.

the place for this is not fictionpress...

I am sorry that you seem to be confused about what to post adn what not to post.. maybe you should check the guidelines.