1.) I LOVED THE LAST LINE, Honestly, it was perfect. Honestly, I picture it as a horrible macabre movie ending, black/white/&red. It was perfect, a line that I will never forget.

2.) I love the line "a futile attempt, the dead are dead." I don't quite know why, it was just so simple and pure and blunt and sad.

It was a wonderful poem, dark and sinister, very beautiful in a twisted way.

Mea of The Review Marathon (link in my profile!)

that last line, it feels like a bullet

beautiful

xD nice I AM NOT HUMAN i are gawd