"the silhouette of a shadow"

it's nice to think about.

really interesting.

i'm not sure exactly what it's about, per se, but i don't mind that because the imagery and word choice are intriguing.

well done.

I liked the phrase 'the silhouette of a shadow' - like the shadow of a shadow. A very dreamy piece )

I just can't believe that you are only 15 years old.

Your vernacular astounds me, to the point of jealousy!

Of what I've read, including this, I think your writing is fantastic and it truely inspires me to go on and write more of my own. You're fantastic!