This story was absolutely amazing. I'm jumping right to Devastation and Discoveries from here. Can't wait to get started and look forward to reading more of your work.

Hey! I know it took me forever to read this but I love it! So good. I think you did an amazing job and I can't wait to read more of your stories when I get the chance. I've been so busy lately. I miss you so much and hope you have a great summer. :) Keep up the great work!

Did you make up the name Ethan Sullivan, or did you get it from the Chicagoland Vampires series by Chloe Neill?

I really really love this story i had first started reading it when you had put it up but then i couldnt remember the site name and i seriously was going crazy tryna find the name of this site and your user name so i can finish reading your story but yea other than my pointless rambling your story is really amaZing and im really looking forward to reading the sequel

Just read the first chapter - it's amazing! Going to go read more now :)

I really do love this story. I just love spies AND romance, AND books about secret/semi-weird schools, so this is perfect! I can't wait to read more, and hopefully finish it soon, because I can't wait for Sophie and Ethan to get together. :o)

Wow, I didn't expect you to release the sequel soon! Good job! I hope you get more reviews!

The story involved in the sequel definitely wasn't something I was expecting, but nevertheless I think this will put the plot into the right direction.

I will never look at another spy book again after this. This just over powers any other spy/agent/CIA/FBI/ANYTHING. I dont know how you got all the info for the fighting, the weapons, or even the plot but it was AMAZING. AND I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT BOOK IN THE SERIES.

great story, cant wait for the sequel!

ahahahahahahahah! i love it! PLEASE WRITE A SEQEUL! any way i absoutly loved it!

Hi,

I've been following this story for a while. I love the way it's evolved, but I feel like it can be considered a little far-fetched. I like it though. I'm sad that you've made both Ethan and Sophie injured, but I feel like it makes perfect sense. The one thing that really bugged me were the spelling and grammar mistakes.

I also feel like there wasn't much spy work involved, which is both good and bad.

Hey, I had to find a chapter I haven't reviewed yet 'cause FP says I've already done one for the final chapter...but oh well.

Ah...finally, the ending. By the time I finished reading the last sentence I felt that something was missing...but I guess it's for the best. It actually made me more excited for the sequel. It also made me wonder who the protagonist will be. Will it be Sophie's parents, Sophie all grown up, or a completely different story altogether?

Whoever it is though, I'll still read it. This is actually the first long story I've ever finished in FP, so I can't compare it to other stories. For now though, you could say that it's the best story I've read in this website, and also one of the best action-filled stories I've read in my life. Good job! And if you ever decide on becoming a full-fledged author, I'll be one of those people who'll buy your books in its first week.

Once again, thank you for this wonderful story and I hope your stories will be better in the future.

LUV it! Update soon ))

Haha, Just kidding. I could care less if you updated. My friendly neighborbood spam is here for you while your gone and can I just say I MISS YOU...a lot. :) I was lookin- baby hodgins in coming! eekk. sorry. Anyways. I was looking for stories to read on here because Fanfiction can get pretty old after a while, and I have no idea how to seperate crap from goodness (this has a point I swear). So I finished my chapter for HIT and came to look at your profile, and I realized, your story is like story gold on this site. There are no words to describe how shocked I was.

-I believe hamburgers are like SNOWFLAKES-. You should write in a gum analogy...that would be sexy. Ethan and his sexyness with a gum analogy. Anywho, I'm ranting. Consider your Spam to be delivered throughly. -Darvia. (p.s. Lions want to hug you .)

I will say this is one of the best stories I have come across Fictionpress. Please update as soon as possible.

This is an amazing story but I just thought you might want to know that chapter 32 and 33 are the same. Keep up the good work!