|Reviews for Heliophobia|
| Minor Masterpiece 4/16/10 . chapter 1
1.) The last stanza was my favorite, it was sort of heartbreaking and obscure, a wonderful ending that tied up the emotion very nicely.
2.) I love the term "lily skin" I had never heard it before (but I'm pretty sure I must've lived under a rock or something) but it just makes me picture soft pale skin, a beautiful line to use.
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| Dante's Disciple 4/11/10 . chapter 1
This is quite sweet in a sympathetic sort of way. How the beautiful things of nature and sunshine can affect someone so.
'nightmare of the lush tropics2 nice contradiction in terms.
| SmashedIce.X 4/11/10 . chapter 1
This is really good! :)
| xxChao 4/11/10 . chapter 1
-sobs in corner while bee hovers above- GO AAWWAY