1.) The last stanza was my favorite, it was sort of heartbreaking and obscure, a wonderful ending that tied up the emotion very nicely.

2.) I love the term "lily skin" I had never heard it before (but I'm pretty sure I must've lived under a rock or something) but it just makes me picture soft pale skin, a beautiful line to use.

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This is quite sweet in a sympathetic sort of way. How the beautiful things of nature and sunshine can affect someone so.

'nightmare of the lush tropics2 nice contradiction in terms.

Nice work!

This is really good! :)

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