|Reviews for September 11th, 2001|
| WildmanWalker 5/20/10 . chapter 1
Great work. We must always remember those poor souls who lost their lives in those despicable attacks, and pray for those who are left to carry on. You really did a good job capturing the feeling of wanting to move on with one's life, but feeling as though you never will...
| name redacted 4/13/10 . chapter 1
Well written, though you lose me a bit in the bottom with acouple of odd word pairings (suicide/ die, me/ bounty). It's great how you can spin this so nobly, while the events surrounding this particular tragedy are so widely protested (as the war in Iraq). Powerful patriotic sentiment.
| ranDUMM 4/12/10 . chapter 1
This is really good! I really feel as if I am in the heat of the moment - that I am expereiencing the emotions that the protagonist inthe story is facing. I think this is really good, as it shows a side of the 9/11 attacks we not have thought of/heard of/seen before. I think it was written really well as well, and the rhyme didn't really seem forced in many places. Maybe this is just me, but I thought one of the middle stanzas was a bit confusing... I thought it went out of sync and rhyhtm, but this could just be me. Great work on this, keep writing!