1.) Very cynical, it was a great sort of dry humor this poem had. I love how it's poking fun at people who do take life too seriously, people that can't just let things go and have a laugh.

2.) Honestly, I found it kind of informitive? I don't know, it was a wonderful point of view, I like the voice you used in it, especially the last stanza and how the other people was being refered to as "sergeant", it was cute. (:

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I like the repetition and the last lines are my favourite ones.

.. that was ... really different. it was really unexpected by your last stanza where I was taken by surprise.. your comparisons were.. really humorous yet a bit of truth... thank you.