wow, you are a phenomenal writer. please dont ever give up xoxo

Once again, simply beautiful

That one was...special. It was scary and wrong and powerful. It should be published, proclaimed for the rest of the world to see. It should be posted on a banner and laid out for the rest of the world. That was truly special.

The bit about Jamie-

That made me cry

So did the fact

That you didn't die

You were kicked out of your house

And sent to the streets

While the rest of the world

Sat back, enjoyed treats

They ignored what was happening

Right on their door

Instead traversed

The Woolworths store

Whoa... -astonished- Amazing...

You don't have to tell me his name but tell me ur dad's address and social security number and I will KICK HIS ASS! I can't even imagine what you've gone through. It pains me to hear stories like this. I'll keep you in my prayers.

This is amazing!

This is sad.

Damn it. I cried. My friend and I shared something similar. Fuck this must have been hard for to write… and thank you for doing so.

I really liked this poem's content - a lot of the poems and stories I write deal with GLBTQ themes, so this kind of thing always appeals to me. There are some lines that could be changed to make it flow a little bit - try reading it out loud to hear where changes could be made. I'll check some of your other stuff out. :D

Such a terrible truth. I wish it didn't have to be. It angers me so. Thank you for writing