|Reviews for don't be afraid|
| Isca 4/27/10 . chapter 1
I like your use of the word "slashed" in the opening line; it defintely adds a certain vibrancy to the imagery.
"Your lip was a flame quivering in the air." Good metaphor. "Quivering" is the perfect word choice here, as well.
| Eva-Ruby 4/12/10 . chapter 1
A beautiful poem, immages so clear! Keep it up!