|Reviews for Without|
| William G. Thorne 4/16/10 . chapter 1
this is very deep. beautiful haiku.
| AvidWriter-92 4/16/10 . chapter 1
Oh, this haiku is sad, but still lovely to read. :) It still has a mystery element to it, but you can still infer what happened...
My guess would be drugs, or suicide, right?
Either way, I'm favoriting this.
| nickyO 4/13/10 . chapter 1
this is touching and sad. Good work.
| Postscript624 4/13/10 . chapter 1
Two things I like:
1) The slight stutter between lines 1 and 2.
2) The cold statement of line three.
You achieved a wonderful density of emotion.