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William G. Thorne 4/16/10 . chapter 1this is very deep. beautiful haiku. -William |
AvidWriter-92 4/16/10 . chapter 1Oh, this haiku is sad, but still lovely to read. :) It still has a mystery element to it, but you can still infer what happened... My guess would be drugs, or suicide, right? Either way, I'm favoriting this. |
nickyO 4/13/10 . chapter 1this is touching and sad. Good work. |
Postscript624 4/13/10 . chapter 1Two things I like: 1) The slight stutter between lines 1 and 2. 2) The cold statement of line three. You achieved a wonderful density of emotion. |