|Reviews for Sally|
| Minor Masterpiece 4/16/10 . chapter 1
1.) I love the creepiness of this poem, very intruiging.
2.) The length of the piece really added to it's strength, in most cases it's hard to portrey an emotion in so few words but you have acheived that, very brilliant work.
3.) I like how the "i" isn't capitolized, something I normally do in my own poetry (: I enjoy how it seems to make the speaker seem less important and really makes you look deeper into the meaning of the poem.
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| LunerWolf1228 4/13/10 . chapter 1
I quickly clicked this when i first saw the title. I love nightmare before x-mas. This seems likes something you wrote on the corner of your notes because you could't get it out of your head. I love it though. That a Sally doll is sitting high on the shelf, leaned over from being placed there so long ago. And from far away I see the narrator(who i think is jack) seeing a child try to get her on their tippy toes.