"Silhouettes eclipse my mind." Stunning image.

Oh, the subtle dazed/ways rhyming is absolutely superb!

"Fuck me in the dark." Well, I'll be damned. What a brilliant opening line for a haiku! I don't think you can get anymore raw than that. :)

Don't really need that kind of love...you know flowers are nice too...candy...a card...a long, long distance telephone call or a post card from half way around the world ;)

Oh the darkness in this poem is wonderful.

I like the use of the word silhouettes, its on my list of favorite words :)

The second line was my favorite.

This is amazing. I love haiku's

Oh I like this "devour me" powerful line.

Probably the most compendious description of 'lust' I've read.. The energy and desire behind the words are palpable.

Or are you a ghost?

Wow, love the title, and love the haiku even more. Added to faves :)

Gritty and dark.

intense.

passionate.

wild.

this is a side of you

i rarely ever see.

it's like monster energy drink's slogan.

unleash the beast. heh. at least, that's

what i think it is. it's been a while since

i had monster. anyway. your pm is on the way.

Hey,

Wow, nice haiku! I liked how it was not formal and yet the passion shone clearly through. This was great, nice work!

ranDUMM