Hi this is a really good story. It's so beautiful. This is one of the good storys on fictionpress.

P.S. Could you by any chance review my story?

This is beautiful, i loved it! Please keep going!

First, might I say that you have a beautiful style of writing. You are so descriptive (in a good way) that you just paint this majestic picture in the reader’s head. Take, for instance, the way you described the little girl. You made every word count, and in just three sentences showed what the girl looked like in whole. Or what about when you described the grass growing higher and the trees getting lower? That was just perfect. I could see them in my head perfectly.

I’m sorry if this isn’t a very good review, but what I’m trying to say is that I really, really liked it. Keep up the good work!