|Reviews for Love's Flower|
| JustMiLuc 5/2/11 . chapter 1
There's something special about short poems. They leave people yearning for more, and this poem is fulfilling yet at the same time, unsatisfying, like the perfect kiss. "As I see him with another/ Gaining the will to move on" is so relate-able to me, and I'm sure to many other people. Beautiful!
| Remembering-Tommorrow 3/9/11 . chapter 1
I LOVE this! It tells so much, but so little at the same time.
| Guest 12/5/10 . chapter 1
there is only one word to describe this poem. AMAZING!
| diwu6398 8/11/10 . chapter 1
I found that to be sad and happy at the same time. I liked the shortness of the poem; I have a REALLY short attention span. In the first line, though, I think it should either say, "My heartbeat's like a drum" or "My heart beats like a drum." I especially like the third line: "Rain is my tears." I like how you related it to the seed/ flower thing. I can tell you worked hard on this. Wonderful job! :)
| Little girl Big world 6/25/10 . chapter 1
LOVE the comparisons in this!
This holds a lot of emotion behind the words.
"As I see him with another
Gaining the will to move on"
I can relate to this, it is hard. Hope you can move on.
| the.quiet.one24 6/24/10 . chapter 1
I like it. It's really... job!
| Smiling Twilight 6/24/10 . chapter 1
I know the emotion behind this one, I have felt it as well. Out of all your poems, this means the most to me.
| haunted.echoes 6/12/10 . chapter 1
Melancholy. I like melancholy, so that's cool. Another great poem with scenes flickering throughout it. :)
| Yorkensmorkenstein 5/28/10 . chapter 1
| howdylv08 5/20/10 . chapter 1
It was beautifully written, but maybe it's just my taste that's holding me back from enjoying the whole thing. I do like the theme of becoming a stronger plant and blossoming through strife and pain. Good job!
| Aamori 5/16/10 . chapter 1
Hm. I'm kind of on the fence with this poem. I like the message and the vivid imagery, but the poem seems to lack a sense of rhythm, and some of it is slightly cliche.
But apart from that, I loved it. Good job!
| ScreamForTheSunshine99 5/4/10 . chapter 1
Absolutely beautiful. I loved this line: "Rain is my tears. It gives me the strength to blossom."
| Bookish Dreamer 5/3/10 . chapter 1
I love the comparisons in this! It winds you to the finish without confusing you and resolves itself peacefully. :D
| R a i n e x 4/28/10 . chapter 1
Very nice. :)
I like it.
The imagery is very impressive.
Better than I could do.
| Ashen Rivenstar 4/24/10 . chapter 1
I love the extended metaphor in this poem. The idea of growing into a new person because of a saddening event comes across really strong.
Personally, I also think that it could use some punctuation, but that's just me. You're the author.