I love this. It's well-written, and just fun to read. :D

great story, keep it up. Its veyr interesting, and I'm wondering whats going to happen next. :D

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So I like your story idea. Especially the fact that Amelia's not pure and, as a young noble, people (like Isaac) would expect her to be. Anyway its really cute, please keep writing.

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