|Reviews for Ripe Little Rabbit: Angel Corpse|
| simpleplan13 3/18/11 . chapter 1
The first stanza I didn't like so much because I wasn't sure if the innocence was what the other person didn't possess or if those were too separate thoughts.
I did like the rest of it though. Very powerful images, especially the second line of the second stanza. The internal rhyme with "strangled" and "mangled" was great and I like how you explained would would happen to each of you. Nice ending too.
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| Phoebe Melinda Halliwell 4/20/10 . chapter 2
Love the description! Real emotion!
| Phoebe Melinda Halliwell 4/20/10 . chapter 1
Images... That is a good question, especially in this case.