|Reviews for Watching|
| imafeckingstarr 8/15/10 . chapter 1
woah, this was pretty awesome. I liked it. Have you thought of writing a full length story based on something like this? If not I think you should; because I really want to read more. Like, I want to know who "he" and "she" are; how extremely similar they are and how the narrator wishes they were in that position with the guy. It was beautifully written :') Keep smiling and keep writing! '
| ShadowFane 6/12/10 . chapter 1
Aww. How sad. I know the feeling. You're talented. :)
| sandcastlesinthesand 5/16/10 . chapter 1
That is really heartbreaking!
| SweeterThenSugar 5/15/10 . chapter 1
This is much better then the orginal one. The story's spacing is so much better and you can see you have improved you writing style! Keep on writing!
| ScreamingInfidelities 4/20/10 . chapter 1
i dont think that you telling us the setting is really that important or necessary. i think that the story was very good i liked it alot. except for when you explained the setting that kinda ruined it for me. not to dwell on that or anything. i liked the point of view of which it was written form though.