|Reviews for Scarlet Hill|
| Quellan Thyde 4/19/10 . chapter 1
This is a great nature hymn. Color, texture, assonance and consonance are all there. That "soon they must return..." line I think goes better in the lower, um, word clump (Technical term! XD) but I see what you're doing with the formatting. That's my one little meaningless nitpick. Good work!