Touching! I loved the part about how "you" gets away with stealing the melon lip balm, because "you're you". I thought it was great. I loved the repetition of Yeah. So. Um. Great job!

Aww, this is cute.

Love the part about emo kids.

This is so cute, and the narrator seems very awkward, in that "I'm trying to be cool about this, but really I'm not cool about this" way. Thank you for writing!