I love the simplicity of your writings. It's short, but you get the point across. Lovely imagery.

I LOVE this piece. It's simple, yet elegant and flowing. You should develop it. I know your profile says you prefer to keep things short but this could turn into a really interesting story.

I feel like I need to write the mirror image of this piece. Could I? Ah, screw it... I'm gonna.

Again, gorgeous writing... keep going. I'm hooked!