The first two lines are incredible. I love that you connected dance with the emotions.

I am not entirely sure what the term demi-irish means, but this haiku was sweet. :)

As soon as I read the summary, I thought of the book 'Katy at School' where Rose reads her attempt at tragic Scottish poetry XD. Dunno if you've read it but that's highly irrelevent anyway. I think I do have an inkling of where you getting at with this though. Good work!

I love the romanticism in your poetry, lovely work.