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So, I wanted to read all of the reviews to My Immortal (because I had a feeling I'd end up laughing really hard,) but it was gone. Instead I found this amazing video, /watch?vY2LmXUL5EuU . The monotone voices are my favorite part, especially in Chapter 4 were you hear a robotic Ebony say Oh Oh Oh, and the get cussed at by a robotic Dumbledore (pronounced Dubledore).

I think she's 12. Who else says "He put his boy thing-ey in mine". Also the way she worded makes me think she is saying she also has a boy thing-ey. This is ridiculous. If I ever read this I'd probably think it was a joke. A sick demented joke.

wait,wasn't her coffin inside's pink? yes they were hot PINK

funny,its says she's not a slut,yet everything she owns is low cut and shows her breasts and she has sex in the forest! lol,I love your comments!

you know,in this chapter,she says quote,"He put his boy thing-ey in mine"end quote 0_0 that kinda freaked me out, I would have loved it if you had commented on that!

how can you snap sexily?

oh mary sue writer who made "ebony" have an orgasm randomly against a tree with spiderman malfoy... this is so "goffik" i think i might kill myself!

Okay let me get this straight-mary-snowflake did it with fake malfoy while ex-Harry was in the room and he FILMED THEM! perverted writer *shakes head in disgust*

Linkin park *shakes head* she got them too...

Your comentry is the only thing stopping my brain from melting!

... Did she know WHAT kawii means! I WILL DAMN WELL TELL YOU: IT MEANS CUTE! AND IT'S MY FAVE JAPANESE WORD GOD DAMNIT!

seriously she is harsh-swearing at someone cuz they like Hillary duff? How shallow can you get!

Reading on!

NO! NOT DOBBY(sp)!

That x-men bit XD IT WAS SO FUNNY!

I laughed so hard at the sandwich fight XD I read the first few chapters of this online-I stopped cuz my phyciatrist said she had enough to deal with -_-

wait, the tee-shirt said... AVRIL LAVIGNE! YOU COW SUE WRITER! AND I LIKE GOOD CHARLOTE AS WELL! *wallows in misery* WHY!

you make this story worth while!

Wow. I read things on Fictionpress pretty much once in a blue moon (I usually reside on Fanfictionnet). But boy am I glad someone put me on to this!

I think I about died reading My Immortal, the actual story, but I did find it tedious to read the bits that were just stupid, pointless and decidedly not funny.

But what I love about your commentary is that it takes out all the mindless stuff that a normal person - albeit with all the will in the world - cannot decipher (probably because you couldn't decipher it). Then, you leave in the mindless stuff that is a hilarious mutilation of the English language.

But I don't think I could have stomached the whole thing again without your commentary. It was tres, tres amusant and had me properly laughing in many places.

A totally undersubscribed gem. Thanks for sharing this and generally brightening my existence and restoring my faith in humanity.

Christ. Not this shit again.

I ran into this the very first time it was post and god i wanted to rip my eyes out. Since then i think there has been at least six other people repost this garbage for the humour. You know i think this is the first time i have seen it on fiction press. It's the what not to do guide under pain of death.

sad part is i think i can pretty much recite her outfit for the first page without rereading today.

have fun mocking, pointing and laughing. me, personally, i really can't sit through until the end.