|Reviews for My Immortal Commentary|
| Kate 3/24/11 . chapter 19
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| Kate 3/24/11 . chapter 17
So, I wanted to read all of the reviews to My Immortal (because I had a feeling I'd end up laughing really hard,) but it was gone. Instead I found this amazing video, /watch?vY2LmXUL5EuU . The monotone voices are my favorite part, especially in Chapter 4 were you hear a robotic Ebony say Oh Oh Oh, and the get cussed at by a robotic Dumbledore (pronounced Dubledore).
| Kate 3/24/11 . chapter 6
I think she's 12. Who else says "He put his boy thing-ey in mine". Also the way she worded makes me think she is saying she also has a boy thing-ey. This is ridiculous. If I ever read this I'd probably think it was a joke. A sick demented joke.
| totallyadork 3/19/11 . chapter 12
wait,wasn't her coffin inside's pink? yes they were hot PINK
| totallyadork 3/19/11 . chapter 10
funny,its says she's not a slut,yet everything she owns is low cut and shows her breasts and she has sex in the forest! lol,I love your comments!
| totallyadork 3/19/11 . chapter 7
you know,in this chapter,she says quote,"He put his boy thing-ey in mine"end quote 0_0 that kinda freaked me out, I would have loved it if you had commented on that!
| Guest 2/26/11 . chapter 40
how can you snap sexily?
| oh mary sues give me the blues 2/26/11 . chapter 4
oh mary sue writer who made "ebony" have an orgasm randomly against a tree with spiderman malfoy... this is so "goffik" i think i might kill myself!
| This story is EPIC 2/20/11 . chapter 28
Okay let me get this straight-mary-snowflake did it with fake malfoy while ex-Harry was in the room and he FILMED THEM! perverted writer *shakes head in disgust*
| This story is EPIC 2/20/11 . chapter 24
Linkin park *shakes head* she got them too...
Your comentry is the only thing stopping my brain from melting!
| This story is EPIC 2/20/11 . chapter 22
... Did she know WHAT kawii means! I WILL DAMN WELL TELL YOU: IT MEANS CUTE! AND IT'S MY FAVE JAPANESE WORD GOD DAMNIT!
seriously she is harsh-swearing at someone cuz they like Hillary duff? How shallow can you get!
| This story is EPIC 2/20/11 . chapter 20
NO! NOT DOBBY(sp)!
That x-men bit XD IT WAS SO FUNNY!
| Omg this is EPIC 2/20/11 . chapter 17
I laughed so hard at the sandwich fight XD I read the first few chapters of this online-I stopped cuz my phyciatrist said she had enough to deal with -_-
wait, the tee-shirt said... AVRIL LAVIGNE! YOU COW SUE WRITER! AND I LIKE GOOD CHARLOTE AS WELL! *wallows in misery* WHY!
you make this story worth while!
| MaidenStar 1/30/11 . chapter 43
Wow. I read things on Fictionpress pretty much once in a blue moon (I usually reside on Fanfictionnet). But boy am I glad someone put me on to this!
I think I about died reading My Immortal, the actual story, but I did find it tedious to read the bits that were just stupid, pointless and decidedly not funny.
But what I love about your commentary is that it takes out all the mindless stuff that a normal person - albeit with all the will in the world - cannot decipher (probably because you couldn't decipher it). Then, you leave in the mindless stuff that is a hilarious mutilation of the English language.
But I don't think I could have stomached the whole thing again without your commentary. It was tres, tres amusant and had me properly laughing in many places.
A totally undersubscribed gem. Thanks for sharing this and generally brightening my existence and restoring my faith in humanity.
| Uncle Rupert 1/18/11 . chapter 1
Christ. Not this shit again.
I ran into this the very first time it was post and god i wanted to rip my eyes out. Since then i think there has been at least six other people repost this garbage for the humour. You know i think this is the first time i have seen it on fiction press. It's the what not to do guide under pain of death.
sad part is i think i can pretty much recite her outfit for the first page without rereading today.
have fun mocking, pointing and laughing. me, personally, i really can't sit through until the end.