Short, yes, but amazingly touching. Great, great work here; it didn't seem too small because I was too in awe of the emotional side to it. You're really talented, keep writing!

HPRK

Wow. Aw honey, why is it so depressing? :( It's really good though :)

Wow.

Just wow.

You have a damn talent girl!

So few words, yet such an amazing piece! There seems to be so much layered behind it. So many ideas. It's great!

Yeah, sure it was depressing, but so what? It was still brilliantly written with an idea behind it, and it ROCKED!

Write more of something, please!