|Reviews for Things I've said to my children|
| Field of Innocence 7/18/10 . chapter 3
I've been lied to a lot, and I've spend most of my time pretending that the lies are true, so I see the haiku from the point of view of the person who the poetry is speaking to.
| Field of Innocence 7/18/10 . chapter 2
The wording and spacing of this poem is very creative. I mean, I know that with haiku you have to stick to a certain format, but I still think that the way this is written and the way it flows is very intriguing.
I probably wouldn't have understood what the poem was about if I hadn't read the title.
| Field of Innocence 7/18/10 . chapter 1
This almost reminds me of something I might have done when I was a child; it also reminds me of a book I read when I was younger, I only read the first part, but it was about someone who drew dots on his face with Sharpie for some reason.
going to school child'
I can almost hear the commanding tone in that line.
| Creeping Collarbones 5/6/10 . chapter 2
That's so funny!
| n.p-simmons 4/27/10 . chapter 3
Perfectly quaint, short and sweet... I like this series for it's honesty.
| frugale 4/24/10 . chapter 3
Do as I say but not like I do! Haha
| frugale 4/24/10 . chapter 2
This oh so brilliant analogy made my day :D
| frugale 4/24/10 . chapter 1
Three letters: LOL
| Punslinger 4/23/10 . chapter 3
That's very clever-appealing to childrens' love of playing "Let's Pretend." I think "we're" is one sylable. Maybe you should have used "we are." Why is the comma after "that"?
| Punslinger 4/23/10 . chapter 1
Very cute. Do your children ever listen to what you say?