I actually said "OH my god!" out loud, at the end. I didn't expect it at all! And you're right, that is so tragic - after such a sweet story...very good ;)

Ah! I'll be honest. I actually expected a lot more than a crash. :/ I loved how it started, I love how it progressed, along with all the simple descriptions and choice of words you used.

But they crashed? Just like that? Why.

wow. i thought how cute and sweet this was now that they finally got together and then that happens. just wow.

you have a good style, keep it up.

but i really want to know; do they die?

Wow...