|Reviews for For Ransom|
| Shadowed Lies 11/16/11 . chapter 11
I really loved this story from start to finish. I was on the verge of tears during this chapter. But don't worry they were good tears. .
Keep up the good work and I can't wait to read more from you.
| Fumiki 11/16/11 . chapter 11
Ha! I guess in my previous review, I complaint about things to early, cause you explained everything in this chapter with no loose ends at all! Sorry for that T_T
I'm GLAD Sophie is not in this chapter AT ALL! And I definitely love it when Alex decided to start over and took David's hand! Now that David is free of drugs, he's not fucked up anymore. He only do what he did because he cares a lot about Alex and don't want to feel abandoned... as twisted as that sounds, but I can understand him I guess.
I love how you end this... It left me with the sort of bitter sweet feelings. Good luck in getting 100 reviews (this is 97th!) and keep up the good work :)
| anythingiwanttowatch 11/15/11 . chapter 11
That was so sad- you're a great writer. I hardly ever cry but your story- tear jerker. .-_-. the ending was so much happier it was so... So... It was just so good!
| RedValley 11/15/11 . chapter 11
*applause* Yay happy ending! I wish you had made the one year epilogue longer. I can totally you see you getting maybe two hundred reviews :) Little sad to see it end since you're literally the only writer that writes to my taste or is still writing. I've searched this site the best I could :) Looking forward to your new story :)
| KittyKatPeterson 11/15/11 . chapter 10
Fuck! You should have Alex try to kill him and then Alex gets put into a mental hospital which in actions makes David feel horrible! haha just a thought :)
| Fumiki 11/15/11 . chapter 10
This was absolutely incredible. I found this story (unfortunately...) quite realistic. I loved every bit of this, my attention was MORE than held throughout the entire thing, and I greatly sympathized with Alex. You made all of your characters very real, especially Alex's fears and emotions. And the moment Sophie decided to break up with Alex right after he get back to school just because there's 'too much nightmare', I despise her. So much. Please don't let Alex end up with her. I don't mind if Alex end up with David, but Sophie? Urghh... Confuse is not a good excuses for not telling the cops when she saw someone shoved Alex into a van.
I'm still confused as to why David act the way he did. If he cares about Alex, then why did he kidnapped him in the first place? He even let the other guys have their way with him. On certain times, I like him, but on other time, I dislike him. And where did he go when he disappeared for days? I understand he has classes, but it doesn't took all day, does it?
Ah well, enough of my ramblings. I truly hope you will explain all this bits in the epilogue :D Please update the epilogue soon, I really like this story :DD Keep up the good work!
| FaeryInAJar 11/14/11 . chapter 10
It can't be the end already!
| deadkitty1 11/13/11 . chapter 10
I'm actually glad the rape scenes weren't described too graphic but nevertheless I was feeling very hurt for Alex during the first couple of chapters. I really thought for sure that he'd try to do something: fight back or bite them especially since it seemed hopeless! It would have done a some good if the protagonist fought even a little.
I know David and Alex are probably going to end up together but I still don't like David. Honestly his anger over Alex forgetting his past and having him go through such a traumatic show to get back at him is very childish and not a deep enough reason for him to go through all that; at least in my opinion. I did like the twist but David needs a 'bad' enough reason to traumatize Alex. A much worst reason. I don't know what though... Unless there was a bad enough reason and David just doesn't want to tell.
The progression of the story flowed really easily. Maybe too easily since I didn't notice the progression of the story turned into months but I guess since it's told through Alex's viewpoint, he had no touch of time either. Still a very good story. I can't wait for the epilogue! So looking forward to that.
| Tears Of Loneliness 11/11/11 . chapter 9
w Oh gosh these cliffhangers haha
| bearhugsxxx 11/6/11 . chapter 9
I can't wait for you to update! This is amazing! I think Alex should find out that really he likes David
| bearhugsxxx 11/6/11 . chapter 6
... I've been having this really odd feeling that David is like his older brother or something. And now that they knew each other I'm like 'WHAT!'... But anyways, this is amazing.
| Reeciez 11/5/11 . chapter 9
When I first read this I think there was only like six chapters and I was thinking that I'd never find it again or you'd never update (cause let's face it all the good stories never finish). So I left it alone with a small sob and found something else to read for a while. I see that you're alive and kicking now and apparently so is David! What does he have up his sleeve now?
| Kaida Nyghtwalker 11/1/11 . chapter 9
Update! Use the rest of this story for NaNoWriMo or something but please finish it soon!
| Fallen Angel900 10/31/11 . chapter 9
I really like this story please update soon.
| P 10/31/11 . chapter 9
Please update soon!
David and Alex story is the best!