|Reviews for The Accident|
| Amethystars 8/1/12 . chapter 9
I loved this story and the style of it, flowing without dialogue. Beautiful.
| Demons Apprentice03 6/30/12 . chapter 9
| elma 1/14/11 . chapter 9
I really love the ending. As in the last few sentences when he makes someone take a picture and in that picture 'she's making a crazy face and [he] looks merely crazy about her.' It was very cute!
And it kind of was heart wrenching in a way. I'm glad and I enjoyed reading this story!
| elma 1/14/11 . chapter 6
I like it! I see the potential for this to be heart-wrenching and I kind of hope you pull it off!
| elma 1/14/11 . chapter 3
I saw last chapter that you said you did no speech marks on purpose. I'm kind of curious why and it seems to be alright except when you use direct speech and just put no speech marks and it just feels a little wrong... But when you use indirect speech and it melds with his thoughts then its perfect :)
| elma 1/14/11 . chapter 2
It's her and I now
It's her and I know*
minuscule error I know but it jumped at me and disrupted the flow
I feel like the tension is still building, so I'm going to continue reading :)
| boredsoul34 10/20/10 . chapter 9
wow! really well written. i was tearing. :)
| larafrancesca 9/5/10 . chapter 9
| FizzyLizzy 7/18/10 . chapter 9
love love love love love.
A truly gorgeous story.
| Hop Skip Jump 6/15/10 . chapter 9
| Laela 6/7/10 . chapter 9
Aww thats so sweet :)
| sparkalie 5/26/10 . chapter 9
Aww! How cute! ,
| renegade01 5/22/10 . chapter 9
aww, that was a beautiful ending. i loved it! i love YOU for making it a beautiful ending, lol... ;)
it was deep and powerful. sigh...awesome job.
| AsHLeYxAnOnYmOus 5/19/10 . chapter 9
beautifully written! don't change a thing about this story. it is fantastic!
| Cheryl White 5/18/10 . chapter 9
I enjoyed it!