|Reviews for Royal Wedding Ouch!|
| Natari Mirumura 6/10/12 . chapter 1
Wow. I did not see this coming. Very funny, and love the unique twist. It really makes you think if Cinderella was comfortable in those heels xD Amazing, keep it up :D
| Dark Blue Lover 12/12/11 . chapter 1
LOL! Clever idea (: Love that Cinderella swears too XD Much more relatable than the usual "oh-the-drama language" of the fairy tales. Great job on this :D
| creating.myself 9/20/11 . chapter 1
| Princess-anna57 9/3/11 . chapter 1
Haha that made me laugh out loud (literally!). Your haikus are always very clever, I adore this! Please post more poetry soon!
| Kallie Bryant 12/10/10 . chapter 1
Okay, that's one thing I never thought of, cutting her foot. Very clever!
| mandycorinthos 11/17/10 . chapter 1
Lol, I guess you can't have happily ever after without some sort of price to pay.
Good job :)
| sophiesix 5/22/10 . chapter 1
hey, thems the breaks of rising above the glass ceiling ;)
| SirScott 5/13/10 . chapter 1
That's funny. I never thought about Cinderella cutting her foot.
| Dante's Disciple 5/8/10 . chapter 1
Lol, brilliant, silly slippers :)
| wo bu ai ni le 5/4/10 . chapter 1
Fairy tales writers are pretty inconsiderate aren't they.
I can imagine little Cathy from Wuthering Heights saying "I'm never going to meet another boy, so might as well get together with Hareton."
| tiger002 4/29/10 . chapter 1
That was good. Well, after she heals she'll live happily ever after.
| natmarie 4/27/10 . chapter 1
Haha. Oh the irony. Love it. Nicely crafted into a haiku. I never have been good at those.
| East-0f-Eden 4/27/10 . chapter 1
| Isca 4/27/10 . chapter 1
The title reminded me of the Swedish royal who just broke off her engagement after she discovered that her fiance was adulterous. Dun dun dun dun! :P
I really like this haiku. You took a cliche fairytale story and made it your own; kudos! I love that Cinderella swears, by the way. I don't know why. I just think that makes her so much more "relatable" and "modern." :)
| J.A. Fletcher 4/27/10 . chapter 1
This was very funny. I always wondered why the hell anybody would wear a slipper made of glass, of all things.