| Reviews for Seasons |
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MariFlorr 12/19/10 . chapter 1Simple, clean, and to the point. Great job. :) |
Ger Bushy 4/28/10 . chapter 1 Here, I think you did a pretty good job at rhyming, other than the last two lines. I feel that rhyming did restrict your writing a little. "Autumn changes colors all" does not make sense no matter how you read it unless you add a comma before "all". Either "autumn changes colors" or "autumn colors all". those three words don't fit well together. That's IMO though. |
Tathwem Essenuejal 4/27/10 . chapter 1Simple enjoyment of the seasons I like the rhymes I love the reasons |
Thenardier 4/27/10 . chapter 1Very simple, yet very beautifully written. There's a sense of wistfulness and innocence around here, and the rhyme scheme and choice of words are fabulous. Very nice! |