|Reviews for Seasons|
| MariFlorr 12/19/10 . chapter 1
Simple, clean, and to the point. Great job. :)
| Ger Bushy 4/28/10 . chapter 1
Here, I think you did a pretty good job at rhyming, other than the last two lines. I feel that rhyming did restrict your writing a little.
"Autumn changes colors all" does not make sense no matter how you read it unless you add a comma before "all".
Either "autumn changes colors" or "autumn colors all". those three words don't fit well together.
That's IMO though.
| Tathwem Essenuejal 4/27/10 . chapter 1
Simple enjoyment of the seasons
I like the rhymes I love the reasons
| Thenardier 4/27/10 . chapter 1
Very simple, yet very beautifully written. There's a sense of wistfulness and innocence around here, and the rhyme scheme and choice of words are fabulous. Very nice!