i love this story :) so u better hurry up and write more of it. im pretty sure i know whats happening... haha but i still wanna read it :) and yes id read the sequel. good job :) x

Incredible story, I love it! Update soon, I can't wait to see what happens next!

so she will find out more of the truth in the next chapter

I am really enjoying your story so far. I don't really understand why Noron would keep her past from her - surely it will just end up damaging their relationship more when she realises what he has been keeping from her (assuming I'm guessing correctly)

One thing that you may want to watch - you repeatedly use the wrong 'their' instead of 'they're' throughout your story. Basically a trick I use is just seeing whether 'you are' fits into the context of the sentence and if it does use 'they're'. Also, only use 'their' when you're referring to ownership i.e. 'their feelings' , 'their seat', 'they're here' etc.

This chapter is fine but if you want to polish up your story a bit more, try to keep an eye on it. I hope this was constructive and I can't wait to read more :)

Um, so she is going to find out everything DUN DUN DUN DUN. Or however you would type that... So UPDATE SOON! So i can find out whats gunna happen

I have been following this story from the beginning, which is something I rarely get to do with my favorite stories. I love your characters and your style of writing. I love how you give clues to Kit's past through dreams and visions. I am almost obsessed with werewolf stories and how each author has their own interpretations of the myths. Your werewolves are among my favorites. oh and I tried to add the fb account but it didn't work :(

why did her father have to die and leave her hanging like that? comtinue writing.. iw anna know what memories come back!

OH MY! HE died! That's so sad!

hi! to answer your questions, 1) I can't even figure out this story and its secrets to even begin comprehend reading a sequel.

2) guys these days are bonkers. end of.

however, i'm sure there are some good ones out there. all the best! (the positivity on bonker guys is just a bit of hope for us all, really)

Yes I would. Well, depending on how the story ends. But no matter what I'd at least start reading it :)

and yes! They are! It's been driving females up a wall round the world! (or at least the us and my humble section of it) Maybe there's something in the water?

of course they are all insane... but it doesnt stop some of the female population from chasing after them...

A sequel, sure, I like sequels, cause it means the story isnt over!

But um, yet it was short, but i'll deal.

I'm still waiting for this big KIT MYSTERY! But it hasnt happened, and her Dad's dying, so that means it won't happen in the near future...

So update soon!

I love this story, so i'd definitely read a sequel :D nd i'm glad that you're feeling better and more up for writing again :)

update

Yea I definitely read if there is going to be a sequel! I'm so glad for the update! I'm glad you're feeling better!

So sorry about that