|Reviews for Letters from the broken past|
| huimei 6/13/10 . chapter 1
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| lili999 6/4/10 . chapter 1
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| RenRen Eli 5/28/10 . chapter 2
Where's the stopping heart beat one! I want that one too. My apologies, I am completely erratic so sometimes I get deep and stern then the next minute I'm immature and naughty as lolita is then I turn out to be a devious, cold and cruel dude. *sigh* multiple personalities sure is hard to drive away...
Anyway here's my comment:
I want to know the lullaby! I wish it sounds like Lacie or Lacrimosa! So many emotions; you write like... um... yourself? I mean it really sounds like Frances. Reminds me of Poor Demi! speaking of which I haven't started chapter 3 yet. Especially the *Will I be Happy Part*. Now, I felt so emotional!
Blaine reminds of the following: Why did I ever wrote the following?
Demi P. - poor girl
Artemis F.- Maybe I'm just thinking of him right now. but maybe because they have the same psycho unloving mother.
Cain H. - because no one loves this poor young boy!
Len K. - because all of his songs killed him...!
You - because she sounds very much like you.
In other cases; Sanctus Avaritia
| bunbun 0316 5/28/10 . chapter 2
sorry if all the chapters in my stories are short.
| free-to-dream15 4/28/10 . chapter 1
I liked how you started in the journal and then moved into the big picture so kudos for that. Be careful about some spelling mistakes as well as making sure your "I's" are all capitalized. All and all a good, solid start so far! Update soon!
| bunbun 0316 4/28/10 . chapter 1
bunbun, im sorry for my wrongdoings:) and sorry if the story is quite boring:) and for the wrong grammars and mispelled words, a big oops. like i worked this thing out after i watched 2 movies. lol, kinda groggy when i did this:)
thank you for your criticism. hope that i could improve this next time:)
| RenRen Eli 4/27/10 . chapter 1
Reminds me of Artemis Fowl and his 'insane' mother... Oh goodness...
Check your (i)s it should be (I), right? As in BIG letter
Mother's eyes not mother eyes
Memorabled... Did you mean Memorable...?
"Not only to me" (Please fix this, it sounds peculiar)
Now with the I'm-watching-you man, This reminds me of Cain Hargreaves and his father who would be very please to kill his son.
I'm watching you...
With utter love and concern,