Review Marathon this weekend! (link in my profile)

"ghosts/of flesh beside me."... I really liked this part. I thought the idea of ghosts of flesh was really creative and an interesting contrast in a way. I also like how you split the line there because it made me think you were just saying ghosts and the next line really changed the meaning of that.

I also like how long that middle line is. It's a refreshing change to see a haiku with such a long line...

To good.

"Sounds so strong they form ghosts." Oh wow. I love the idea that 'howls in the night' give birth to actual 'ghosts.' That's brilliant.

Atmospheric. I can picture the thought.

Eerily beautiful. I love you writing - I see you've gone on a bit of a spree here :)

Great job.

Seriously, when are you heading to the publishers? I'd sure buy any one of your work.