Can you update this?

Cuz it's really good so far.

An interesting chapter, though it was quick. One thing you could do to improve it though is maybe add a bit more description? Other than that, it's good, and I really can't wait to read more.

Carnivorous Dinosaur

I like how you opened this chapter-it's a lovely little hook, and it drew me in. Although, I did find one little mistake:

"You'll just have to practise," she said. "After all, practice makes perfect."

-The first 'practice' is spelled incorrectly. The second, however, is right.

Carnivorous Dinosaur

Very nice first chapter. I'm interested to read more.

Your first sentence was very good and captured my attention. You use nice imagery, too. The scene with the flowers, I could easily picture it in my head in detail. Good job with that.

I wonder if Maria will be able to do the same in the future?

overall, very well written and little mistakes.

Keep Writing,

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