|Reviews for A Stranger Passes By|
| courtingcatastrophe 5/4/10 . chapter 1
I really enjoy this, it paints a picture, but one made of a thousand strokes, each made with a thousand hairs of the brush, each being a different situation this could fit. The only thing is the last line might do with a "She smiles." Though, without it it does add a whole other picture, that the one who did the harm is smiling, a sadistic smirk of innocent evil. Anyway, keep it up!
I Blew Up The Closet,