-shivers-

Woah. Maybe it's because I'm reading this at 1:58 am, or maybe it's just cause your writing is fucking awesome. Yeesh, the shit you write gives me chills. Keep up the awesome work.

very heavy piece, and extremely well written.

i like the way you list dissimilar things.

"Tell me I'm violent,

Tell me I'm lovely"

great job.

It's good!

It seems to me with the right tune, it could easily become a Linkin Park song!

The only thing is:

There are a few mistakes like: "With a gut gull of posion" and "A backstabbed".

But then again, why proofread your emotions?