Love it. Well written. Poetically beautiful. Keep writting.

Adorable :)

This was... sweet. Extremely sweet.

Loved it (:

Oh nice. Rather short but I got the point.

YOU!

Yes, you. I've been waiting forever for an update. LOL, thank you for letting us know you're still alive. And I know how you feel. Writer's block is ugly, yes? I can go WEEKS without typing something fit for other people's eyes. It's kinda sad, actually. Hope your muse hits you back full force. :) HAPPY WRITING.

xoxluurve

i opened le you-tuube and found the song ;D

good background music choice for this (Y)

theres something about this story thats really awesome... but i cant put it into words hah!

kind of like... a moment in time slowed down to snails pace, where every small thing means a much greater deal

anyways _ i liked it well done!

tell your friend he did a great job getting you to write again. oh, and i like his part. and having the guy's part in poem form and the girl's part in prose is nice.

i love your writing, as usual. but the line '...i remember how your footsteps sound like, a perfect synchrony to mine' sounds a bit awkward. i think you could have worded a bit better? 'always in perfect synchrony with mine' or something. just a thought.

it's short and sweet. it's a perfect glimpse into the thoughts of the two. it's a great oneshot. :)